อาทิตย์ที่แล้ว ได้รวบรวมเอกสารหนังสือต่างๆ บังเอิญเจอแฟ้ม Eng 11 เลยทำให้คิดถึง Tom ครูอังกฤษที่สอนการเขียน paragraph , essay พร้อมเทคนิคเล็กๆน้อยๆที่ทำให้ paragraph หรือ essay ของเราดูดีมีชาติตระกูลขึ้นมาทันที..
เทคนิคที่ Tom สอนในการเขียน paragraph มีดังนี้ :
1. การใช้ similes : a comparison between two objects using like or as
Ex : Her hair was as soft as silk. My boyfriend eats like a pig. My face was as pink as a cooked lobster.
Also, one hour of treatment seems like twenty tedious hours for me.
2. การเน้น โดยการใช้เทคนิค Parallelism : words or phrases repeated for dramatic effect.
Ex: การเน้นที่ verb เช่น In English 11 we love our paragraph homework, we love our vocabulary homework, and we love our essay homework.
an adjective: We get up early for work, early for our children, and early for English 11.
3. การเน้นความแตกต่าง โดยการใช้ Juxtaposition : contrasting items placed side by side ( opposite place)
Ex: I entered the classroom and inside there were rats, poisonous snakes , and teachers.
From Beijing to Burnaby chefs are discovering the wonders of cooking rats.
4. ใช้เทคนิค Alliteration : the repetition of the first consonant.
Ex: We serve stewed rat with steamed rice. From Beijing to Burnaby,
5. ใช้เทคนิค assonance : the repetition of vowel sounds
Ex:From Beijing to Burnaby chefs are discovering the wonders of cooking rats.
และนี่คือตัวอย่างEssay ที่ มีตัวอย่างเทคนิคต่างๆ ดังนี้
Essay Topic: Boys should not learn to cook - agree or disagree
Turn Crisis to Opportunity
If you were a boy and you didn't learn how to cook, you may lose many good opportunities in your life. Boys should learn how to cook for marrying a lucky girl, finding a good job, and changing to a superior lifestyle.
A boy should learn how to cook an egg. If a boy learns how to cook an egg, he can survive when his parents kick him out of their house. He can fry eggs in the morning for 12 months a year for his girlfriend. She will marry him for his eggs. For dessert on Valentine's Day, he could scramble eggs with strawberry jam, Chinese girls will love him, Canadian girls will love him, and the girls of the world will adore him.
Learning how to cook can get a boy a job. If a boy learns how to cook ground beef and spaghetti in night school with the V.S.B, he can work in Shen Zhen, Shennan Road and earn 10,000 RMB per month. With this he can drive a Shen Zhen Ferrari, wear Shen Zhen Armani, and drink Shen Zhen Chivas Regal. A boy who learns how to cook will live the good life.
Cooking may change a boy's lifestyle. If a boy learns how to cook fresh seafood in a coconut from internet, he can be alive when he and his companions are deserted on an uninhibited island. They will love his organic seafood coconut dish. They will miss him at least three times a day. After rescue from the island, he will be very busy for demonstrating his wonderful recipe, he will be very busy for earning his living from his wonderful recipe, and he will be very famous around the world from his creative recipe.
For these three beneficial outcomes, boys should learn how to cook. Being able to cook is a life skill which helps a boy keep his beloved girl, earn a lot of money, and turn crisis to unexpected opportunity.
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